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Discussion in 'Art of ImDeity: Kingdoms' started by moirafae, June 8, 2012.

  1. Twichl

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    I saw this thread and couldn't resist. I love poetry. So I just wrote this. :)

    Hell
    Wrapped in a blanket
    unabled to get free.
    Can't breath. Sweating.
    Each moment passes.
    End it now!
    Screams the tired soul inside.
    A day passes
    But the blanket pulls tighter
    And tighter
    Heavy, damp air.
    inside the dark tomb.
    Vague hope
    dies that night.
    A new day begins,
    but it only clentches tighter.

    Freedom
    Roar of predators
    pounds your ears
    seemily endless
    yet an instant
    To shed your skin
    in the silence of
    an icey morning
    Awestruck wind
    blowing distantly
    a moment which
    a catipillar torn
    Rises from the ground
    to eternity,
    sun breaks the horizon
    you rise and rise
    Hawks and falcons disperse
    all shed their skin
    in the glory of morning
    each butterfly flies


    ~Twichl
     
  2. KiddieWish

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    Some poems I read during class time that I enjoyed:

    Being Forgotten
    http://shoelessboywonder.wordpress.com/2010/02/15/being-forgotten/

    Lets just sit, pretend
    Be who we were once again
    When we were kids long ago
    When we played in fresh snow
    Before we drifted apart, remember the start
    All those years in our past
    Years that never did last
    When we talked every single day
    When nothing was in our way
    Before you moved far away
    In my heart you will stay
    The good times, the good rhymes
    Though it hurts me to hear you fall
    Its better than hearing nothing at all
    Dear friend please stop this stall, just give me a call
    Let me know your alright
    Please make things right
    I know you have this new life
    Far from my tethered old strife
    That doesn’t mean I can’t be there for you
    Because for me my friendship is true….

    Her...
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/her-158/

    I can never get my mind off her,
    I wonder if she'd mind if i'd,
    make her my own,
    and never let her go,
    hug her tight,
    treat her right,
    act all polite,
    take her on a date,
    make sure i'm never late,
    kiss her on her lips,
    talk about our kids,
    Make her feel like princess,
    living in a castle,
    hope that is not too much hassle,
    But i am so blessed,
    hope i can be the best,
    hold you tight,
    on my chest,
    pass the test,
    NOW YOUR MINE!

    Forsaking My Love
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/forsaking-my-love/

    I hate you
    I wish to tear you away from me
    This tumor that clings to my chest
    The thing that makes me ache
    That haunts my dreams
    And tears at my desires
    You have brought me only pain
    My untamed heart
    That beast that gnaws at my soul
    That pitifully whines
    Bringing my mind into unwanted pain
    Yet how can I blame you
    How can I chastise you when I listen intently to your pleas
    Why should I punish you for what my eyes feed upon
    How can I blame my eyes for falling upon her
    She who brings light to the eternal darkness of my soul
    She whose eyes bring me to subjection
    Whose smile leaves me in awe
    How can I blame you when my ears are met with her laughter
    How they submerge into her song
    How they quiver at her voice
    Why should I punish you for inclining my soul
    Tempting it with the one sense that has been forsaken by her
    How could I look over the thought of the brushing of lips
    The touching of hands
    The binding of the soul, mind, and body
    O you wretched heart
    What am I to do with this constant companion
    How could I tear you away
    When she is the cause of my agony
    Or rather
    It is the lack of her which brings me sorrow
    It is the need for her that leaves my heart in pain
    Yet she is not mine
    She was never mine
    She will never be mine
    O my poor heart
    How can I make you see reason
    When all you do is show me the truth

    For Love's Sake
    http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/for-loves-sake

    I'm so tired of this empty feeling
    I'm so tired of being alone
    I lay here staring at the ceiling
    Waiting by the phone

    I jump when the phone rings
    It brings a smile to my face
    When he hangs up my heart stings
    And I sink back into my lonely place

    I wish and I dream
    That we'll be together soon
    I can't wait until we can look up hand in hand
    At the stars and at the moon

    I yearn for his kisses
    His touch - His embrace
    I can't wait for Thursdays
    When I get to see his face

    I'm flooded with thoughts of him
    In my heart, soul, and mind
    I imagine his touch
    So gentle and kind

    I try not to weep
    I hope he doesn't hear my cries
    But I can't stop the tears
    Falling from my eyes

    I cry a thousand tears
    And think - how much more can I take?
    But in my heart I know I'd wait a thousand years
    All for love's sake
     
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  3. KiddieWish

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    Sorry I took so long to respond to this but here you go: http://snd.sc/QBYvqr
     
  4. minibirde

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    Great! I'll go listen to it now.

    Edit: Wow! sniff. sniff I need a tissue !
     
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  5. KiddieWish

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    Warning...Some explicit lines.

    Would You...

    Would you still love me if I went deaf
    Would you still love me if I went blind
    Would you still love me if I became physically handicapped
    Would you love me to my last breath...

    Would you still love me if I told you I have trust issues
    Would you still love me if I told you I told you I have low self esteem
    Would you still love me if I told you I was severally insecure
    Would you love me to my last breath...

    Would you still love me if if I lost one or both of my arms
    Would you still love me if I lose one or both of my legs
    Would you love me enough to understand I never meant any harm
    Would you love me to my last breath...

    Would you still love me if we suddenly lose the communication when we had talked everyday
    Would you still love me if I told you I need help and that I can't go on without you...
    Would you still love me after a traumatic event
    Would you love me to the point you'd put up with everything concerning me...

    Would you still love me if I told you I cut myself to get away from the pain
    Would you still love me if I told you I starve myself because I feel I'm too big
    Would you still love me if I told you I'm secretly depressed but feel I deserve it
    Would you love me to the point you'd put up with everything concerning me...

    Would you love me enough to accept me for who I am
    Would you love me enough to try to understand where I'm coming from
    Would you love me enough to try to work with me to make this work...
    Would you love me to the point you'd put up with everything concerning me...

    Prove me wrong, prove to me that every person isn't the same
    Prove me wrong, prove to me I won't end up getting played like a game...
     
  6. Gwenhywar

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    Kiddie, a wonderful poem. Thx for sharing. :) Thought about posting a new one as well...
     
  7. iSquared

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    It's not mine, it's from a song, but still so great that everyone should know it.

    I'd rather have bad times with you,
    than good times with someone else.
    I'd rather be beside you in a storm,
    than safe and warm by myself.
    I'd rather have hard times together,
    than to have it easy apart.
    I'd rather have the one who holds my heart.
     
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    What a perfect reply to the previous post
     
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    I watched the pilot as he spoke in his texan drawl
    In my mind...
    His honesty mingled with his funny choice of words
    describing the need for patience from us all
    as snow swirled below
    20 degrees
    difference
    we did not meet at all
    yet the humor brought
    us
    side
    by
    side

    and we laughed
    when we landed

    not a bit of turbulence

    in the beautiful
    white
    snow


    minibirde
     
  10. Gwenhywar

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    The Thorn
    The seed was laid some time ago
    she worked on it with a small hoe
    she watched it from dusk till dawn
    and suddenly it grew a thorn.

    The rose was huge and strong
    she thought she'd run her finger along
    felt the warmth just in her hand
    thought how well the growth went.

    Then the thorn ran into her
    she started ranting and to swear
    but when it ended it was clear
    the next time there would be no fear.
     
  11. Kassial

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    I apologise for my poor attempts at what can't even be called poetry, but as of late I've been trying to find a way to relay my feelings, these are my first attempts.

    Darkness
    Darkness forever clear
    To the being that knows
    All too well what entails
    Solitude and starvation
    Angst and rage, rage and angst
    Loneliness and contempt
    Darkness forever clear
    Darkness forever blinding

    Trazodone
    Useless
    Pointless
    Popped once or more
    No hope
    Fifty milligrams of poison

    Bastion
    Release from life
    Misery, anger and sorrow
    If for only a little while
    But better than not at all

    Depression:
    Disheartened by it
    Emotionally exhausted
    Painful to bear
    Resigned
    Entrapped in its embrace
    Sorrowfully suffering
    Shattered to pieces
    Irreversibly miserable
    Overwhelmed, oppressed
    Nightmarish

    Glasgow
    Violence and crime is forever rife
    Alcohol-fueled delinquents roam
    Knives and blades, ahoy
    Hopeless, hapless, desolate

    Buildings of old, destroyed
    Many starve, many hurt
    Life is poor, life is wasted
    Weather so dull, rains down on emotion
    Ravaged and battered
    Singed and shattered

    Lives aren't lived
    Dragged through thick and thin
    Then only death

    Plus this crappy Haiku:

    Darkened sun rising,
    many
    hopeless fools
     
  12. KiddieWish

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    El O' Vee Eee

    I'm in love with you
    However, I don't know how to tell you
    I've never felt this way
    The feeling in which I don't know what what to say
    Every time I see you, my heart races
    I lose my breathe, I forget who I am
    Time seems to go by too quickly with you
    And time seems to go so slowly without you
    I'm in love with you, my best friend
    And I'm in fear that we might just follow the trends
    I fear of nothing worse than a stranger with memories
    I fear of seeing you and you act like you don't remember the memories
    Yes, you say you'll never leave me
    But I've heard that before to only be left
    Left in the dirt, and where we had marked our love, there lied next to me the tree
    On the ground with dead leaves; you theft.
    You stole my heart and pieces of me
    And all that's left was my hurt
    With the blood stains all over my shirt
    Our happy ending was everything but glee.

    It's You
    Acting like you don't know me
    Oh how funny this has become
    Because you still had your things you left in my room
    And I threw it all out the window just like you did with my heart
    Acting like you don't know me
    Oh how silly this has become
    Because I saw you out in public with another guy the other day
    You looked me right in the eye and ran the other way
    Acting like you don't know me
    Oh how saddening this has become
    Because I found all the stupid poetry I wrote for you
    And I ripped it up and threw it in the fire, oh what a view
    Acting like you don't know me
    Oh how deafening this has become
    Because now that I'm silent
    It's you who hears all the noises
     
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    REVIVE!

    Anyways, this poem is from a song by GRiZ.
    Written and narrated by Marc Pinate.

    Together with "Planet Earth" by Michael Jackson my favorite poem ever written.

    First play this song, then read along.
    Pro tip: Use headphones with stereo sound



    -*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*

    Fred calls at almost 3 o' clock,
    songs meet by cellular vibrations and promised revelations,
    and mystical manifestations of the eternal and divine.

    Still blows my mind with all these thoughts traveling at the speed of light,
    caught by my phone to remind me that I'm not alone,
    that it's time to do a rain dance,
    cause they ain't no such thing as chance.

    We are for sacrifice, a battle of symbol of sacrifice,
    to a symbol of a God.
    And that's what we had to do,
    Fred and I.

    Journey to the other side of "why" to the last number of pi,
    we own the illusion of eyes,
    a more accurate end to have what is called a ceremony.

    Where we take the divine stage of ritual and myth, turn water into wine,
    we find our minds and unwind ourselves to a clearer perception of existence,
    'cause that's what we are... "Human Beings" that is the human version of beings.
    Seeing that is in itself, the first step to enlightenment.

    It's time we chimes a couple more times,
    when all of his words begin to fit together like tightest define,
    divined to battle through time,
    emanating from the mouths and minds of all the true unseasoned prophets.

    And like rockets,
    Fred speaks spells,
    blows on conch shells, rings bells,
    and tells me to let his words enter my ear.

    So I can hear and speak past all these ridiculous limits of time and space.

    Force me to answer his questions.
    Do I want the revelation? Or speak the incantation?
    Raise my level of concentration? Begin my own personal transubstantiation?
    And now I'm on a beach, now Fred and I are on a beach,
    and now could be the beginning of time for all I know.

    But even that is more make-believe, for time does not exist.
    Time is what vomits from our mind as we try to comprehend that,
    which is beyond human comprehension.
    That which is so much a part of us, that it is beyond us.

    Eternity...

    But I'll try to explain it.
    Or rather I'm gonna poke a hole in this piece of cardboard,
    and point it at the sun.
    And this isn't really a solar eclipse,
    but the image of a pinhole point at it;
    because at the end we can never actually see the eclipse,
    because in the end, it all means nothing.
    When you add up all the highs and lows,
    the joy, the pain, the lightness and the dark,
    everything cancels itself out.

    In the end we're all just heading towards zero.
    Zero is the perfect balance;
    the net charge of the universe is zero,
    an infinite force pushing against its infinite and opposite for all of eternity.

    That equals zero.
    In other words,
    zero and infinity are two sides of the same equation.

    Which is to say: "the moment is eternal, and eternal is the moment."
    The moment is eternal, and all eternity exists in this one moment.
    Therefore, we are eternal.
    Therefore we are in heaven.
    And hell, hell is being in heaven and not realizing it.
    Lifetime, after lifetime, after lifetime...

    I am eternal, and thus do not exist, except as everything.
    I am the light to the life;
    I am the bread of the everlasting covenant,
    and which in no way implies that I am God.
    No my brothers and sisters I do not profess to say that I am Jesus Christ.
    What I'm trying to say though is,

    Maybe... Maybe... He is me.
     
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    Ozymandias-Percy Byshhe Shelley(I did not get this from breaking bad!)

    I met a traveller from an antique land
    Who said: "Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
    Stand in the desert. Near them on the sand,
    Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown
    And wrinkled lip and sneer of cold command
    Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
    Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
    The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed.
    And on the pedestal these words appear:
    `My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
    Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!'
    Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
    Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare,
    The lone and level sands stretch far away".

    The Road Not Taken- Robert Frost (Before someone points it out I know he doesn't take the road less traveled)

    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And looked down one as far as I could
    To where it bent in the undergrowth;

    Then took the other, as just as fair,
    And having perhaps the better claim
    Because it was grassy and wanted wear,
    Though as for that the passing there
    Had worn them really about the same,

    And both that morning equally lay
    In leaves no step had trodden black.
    Oh, I kept the first for another day!
    Yet knowing how way leads on to way
    I doubted if I should ever come back.

    I shall be telling this with a sigh
    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.
     
  15. KiddieWish

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    I miss you
    With all my heart
    Take it back
    And I am yours

    Forever,
    I love you
    I can't deny it
    It's marked in stone

    I see you
    Not in physical form
    In the dream world
    And nuts I've become

    I wake up
    I'm back to reality
    Hoping for a text
    Hoping for a call

    I look for a sign
    But none to be found
    All that's left is ashes
    Love that's nevermore.

    I want you bad
    I want you here
    I won't deny
    I need you evermore.
     
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    My life is dreadful
    My heart is sore
    All i want is something more

    Something happy
    Something hopeful
    Something that'll make my life less dull

    From the mind of a lonely 7th grade boy ^^
     
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    We'll eat some cake
    but not me
    because without ponies
    my cat eats thee

    (My first poetry thinger magiger, :D)
     
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    Oh,
    how I've felt the same
    Is life but a game?

    What does life have to offer?
    Will it bring miracles
    Because I've been dying for a miracle

    I remember being at your age
    I was bullied and couldn't turn the page
    The paper cuts still sting to this day

    The thoughts linger with words
    Voices sound like morning birds
    I promise you aren't alone for I bring light...
     
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    Oh, how dare I to think upon those days of yar,
    my days when I was a young girl,
    so tense those moments when I thought we were friends...
    but to discover you had wanted more
    only after your anger had subsided and you'ld gone off
    after alice whats-her-name

    and I was left standing
    because I didn't know you wanted...


    Silly me to just be glad to have a friend in you.
     
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    And when I thought that you were nice,
    you made my day dreadful.
    And when you thought I was a freak,
    you made my day deppressing.
    And when I thought you were nice.

    You made my day dreadful.
     

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