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i would like opinions on my build in creative its already up for reveiw

Discussion in 'Creative Tips, Critiques, and Advice' started by Chlorislunaia, March 11, 2014.

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did i put too much blue wool for the river and sky?

  1. yes

    6 vote(s)
    54.5%
  2. not enough XD

    5 vote(s)
    45.5%
  1. Chlorislunaia

    Chlorislunaia

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    Rank #/Plot size 32x32
    Plot ID #9576
    Theme of build: a pop up painting of a dragonfly flying over a lilly pad towards cattails on the side of a river
    Specific question just need a critque on a 1-5 rating please :)
    Screenshots/area details upload_2014-3-11_5-1-57.png this is from the side upload_2014-3-11_5-2-55.png and <- is from above
     
  2. CYRAX_VORTEX

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    Thats pretty cool
     
  3. Fiver26

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    now heres the thing, if its a river, why not actually put water in it? i know you have ice blocks but they are a bit blendy with the blue wool you put, as well as kinda in a straight line, which will not happen in a river. If i were you, and wanting to keep current theme, i would add some actual water and show contours in the landscape, as well as use a different color for the cattails, maybe a lighter shad of green if their is one.
    all in all, about 2.87 outa 5, just because of details not taken into account
     
  4. Kmussman

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    it seems fine but i agree why not ask for someone to help add water but other then that i think it looks great your doing great
     
  5. Fiver26

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    *whispers* it's creative, you don't need someone to put water down for you

    Also it's been a while, did it pass/did you change anything chlor?
     
  6. porterdog02

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    I think it was good to had in the little details to get ranked up it helped
     
  7. bluehousekatie

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    I have a question, what would be a good thing to build?
     
  8. porterdog02

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    I built something new on my plot lvl 1
     

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