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Discussion in 'Great Constructions' started by 31415926535897, June 16, 2012.

  1. 31415926535897

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    Name of stucture: Caldera Office Building / 314's Shop
    Story of structure: When I joined caldera, there was friendliness in the air, lfdeath was one of the assistants at that time. He would recruit a lot of people, help, and always maintained the town. He left to create the town of Geodome. M4ttM4kin100 was also another assistant. He built structures to implement the town, but he just disappeared. They both left empty shells. and my store used to belong to lfdeath. I filled their shells and what do u know?
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    Skirts are definitely not recommended on this floor!
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    Additional Information: It is not done. Ninjakiller22 has given me some stone brick to make this. mLSSStress has given me some stone bricks, glass, and wood. squeezal has made a very efficient tree farm for me to use. Everyone in Caldera that has seen it has given me a lot of support. Also everyone outside of caldera that has seen it have also given me a lot of support. This is a very tall tower, it needs a lot of support :) This here is a building. All of the other taller structures are called towers. I think it is safe to say that this is the tallest building on the main world from base to current top. The base is considered the bottom of the basement.
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    Here's the first floor of my store
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    A normal Decorated rental room
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    Someone is renting a room :) Business is doing great.
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    A jungle tree inside the skyscraper, Its by the proposed café which will open when the server updates to 1.3
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    The patio of a rentable party floor(s)
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    I'm in the picture on 2nd from the bottom. YAY! Also, after visiting your office building, I must say its very nice.

    And, are you going to be doing the inside?
     
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    Very nice design! It looks a bit like someone took a bite out of it. Perhaps because your name is Pi, and the building muncher thought it was made out of Pie?
    What are you going to be selling in that shop?

    *Cough* mLSSStress's shop in foreground *cough*
     
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    K. Constructive criticism.

    I'd say that the materials are not that great. If it was coupled with great architecture, it would be a great construction. But, it looks like a simple rectangular prism with windows. I'd say you either make it look like a broken down building, or you add better architecture. But still, I understand, it's not finished yet.

    -Aqua
     
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    Haha that looks very cool, it must have taken forever!
     
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    It will be served as some shops. I will allow to put other people's shops into this building, but only for people I can trust. It will be used as offices, and there will be some floors u can reserve for parties. I will also let trustworthy people rent it for a place to stay. And if there is still room, there will be tree farms, melon farms, pumpkin farms, sugarcane plantations, and wheat farms.

    And here's a link to the building from the live map
    http://www.imdeity.com/map/#/-288/64/-2201/max/0/0
     
  8. Leviathan_Ziz

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    It's a very nice and new type of structure, however it's still a rather bland sky-scraper, adding in color and furniture would certainly be advised before I could judge this with a "yes" .
     
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    My skyscraper is almost done. The things that are almost complete is the farms *need more floors in basement, Cafe w/ a jungle tree inside it *Setill needs more windows, Party rooms *needs windows and cake, and the mob grinder *Not dark enough Only the floor is still there.
    (I will not post pictures of this, as they are greater spoilers than description in text. The only picture frames you can get of this is visiting the building itself.)
     
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    It looks like it would fall over in real life. It's probably just my ocd but it always irks me when a build defies physics. If i look beyond the gravity-defying nature of the building then I think it looks good but not great. Other than the chunk taken out of the middle it's just the same pattern repeated over and over. You'd really have to spruce up each floor to make it truly stand out as great, but even then i would suggest giving the exterior a more-interesting appeal. The design near the bottom looks better.. but again, it defies physics and the building would simply crumble in real life.
     
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    I think it wouldn't fall in real life. It has a strong base, and it is almost like the world trade center, It would only take thermite/thermate to fall over
     
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    I have revised the post for my skyscraper, check it out

    P.S. Leviathan, Now that it has furniture and jungle trees, will u give it a yes?
     
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    I took out my shop roof for a remodel and what do I see; :) shop2.jpg
     
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    lol, Andrew might say something similar when he remodels his sky island
     
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    May I please receive more constructive criticism? I really need it.
    I do need ideas for furniture and change up some of the rooms
     
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    You should buy the plot behind this one if it hasn't been snatched up already and try to use the extra space to enhance the exterior of the building. I don't think anyone in town would be apposed to allowing you to use the area above the road in front and the area above the Shop's arch next to you. I would love to see what you can do with more space.
     
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    When i first saw the building i thought wow what a giant piece of boring ness all i saw was the same pattern repeated over and over and
    over again the giant hole in the middle unfortunately that just made the structure look just dumb.
    A good idea would be to use more blocks spice it up don't just use wood and glass or it won't make it far past criticism.
     
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    I would like to see less visual stress though. I don't like the retro look, or i don't like it when things look cluttered. Thats why I'm odd because my room is clean. I also want it to look profesional. Is there any suggestions on that?
     
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    To get an idea of how to make a modern looking skyscraper just look over in wraught. They have a handful of them. Some of them are replicas of real-life buildings so you could go the same route or simply get inspiration from doing a google image search. You don't have to copy one exactly.. but you could get ideas of how to spruce yours up so it's got more style to it.
     
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    OK, i go some inspiration, Im gonna try to buy the plot in back of me also
     
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