Story of Minecraft (W.I.P.)

Its a script for a machinama i was gong to make

Herobrin: He Thinks its fake. He thinks it is just a dream
notch: how silly of him, it is a lot more then that.....
-fades to white-
-reapers on Steve’s face-
Steve: what’s going on? Where am I? Oh, I am in a forest. Man i am cold, i am going to need a shelter
before it gets dark
-Steve goes to a tree and breaks one-
Steve: Ahh! its, its, floating...now what?
-collects rest of tree-
Steve: just take it and do a little shaving here and cut it here, there wood planks!
Steve: now i need a basic home...place one here, oops wrong spot...
-voice fades off-
Herobrin: You will visit my ream first... the bottom...
- Steve’s voice returns-
Steve: There all done, now I need a better building system, put four planks together
there a crafting table!
Narrator voice: After many days many nights fighting the horrible creatures of the night, the creepers, the zombies, the spider and the skeletons,
when he discovers another,made of pure darkness,with dark purple eyes,the enderman..
Steve; wow! what is that! it's black it it has that piece of stone!my my,wait, it probably not friendly.... hey Mr.dark guy! who are you?
-Steve looks at enderman-
-enderman eyes goes pink and he stares-
Steve: wow...
Herobrin: idiot, you shouldn't have prevocked him!
Notch: be quit he is not supposed to know we are here!
Herobrin: it doesn't matter he isn't supposed to be here!
-Herobrin goes and attacks enderman-
herobrin: get back! i say get back! Go to where you came you bloody Enderman!
-purple flash happens and enderman is gone-
Herobrin: yea you better be afraid of me! The great Herobrin!
Notch: HEROBRIN! YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE HERE! YOU HAVE REVEALED YOURSELF TO STEVE.
Steve: How do you know my name!
Notch: OH I KNOW ALLOT ABOUT YOU
BUT HEROBRINE DOESN'T KNOW MUCH AND SHOULD COME TO ME RIGHT NOW OR PARISH!
Steve: whats going on here
-grab notch-
i wont let go untell you tell me,me, who are you anyways? and what was that thing?
-pulls out iron sword-
tell me now.
notch: oh you are so impatient,just like herobrine here,i suppose i can answer the questions as
simple as i can,
Steve:who are you!
Notch:why, i am notch the god of minecraftia,and this is herobrine the devil of minecraftia,
Steve: what was that thing,notch.-he says shocked-
Herobrine:enderman,horrible creatures,they should stay in the end but the testifacets made a
portal to the bloody place!
Notch:i think that is enough for now,herobrin
now Steve, we shall leave.
Steve:what! i have more questions,don't leave!
Narrator voice:Steve wonders home, with more questions then he started with.
Steve:ugh,who are those idiots,i might just go mining to calm my nerves...
-mines for long time and finds diamond-
Steve: yes!Finally!
found some diamond! OK lets make a pick now!
-mines more and finds obsidian- what is this stuff it wouldn't work with a iron pick,
but will it work with a diamond pick lets see,a little chip a SMACK here,and,it worked!
-collects 14-
Steve:yea!
-goes home and build a 5 tall and four wide rectangle-
Steve: ugg,i am bored,
-goes get flint and steal-
-sits by frame and strikes flint and steal-
Steve: now what should i do, maybe i can,AHH! what,what is that!
-a spark from the flint and steal lit portal-
Steve:what,what,what the...
-faints-
-four hours later Steve wakes up-
Steve: that was a horrible dream..not a dream.
Steve: its some kind of portal,but where does it lead?
Steve: only one way to find out.
-Steve enters portal-
-goes into world full of lava and flesh-
Steve:What.the.hell
Herobrine: exactly, hell
Steve: wait,so am i dead
-herobrine laughs-
Herobrine: no you are very much alive,this is the bottom realm,hell or nether it has 3 names
Steve:bottom realm? so there is more?
herobrine:yes, this is my realm, there is your realm and notch's realm
and the middle witch belongs to both me and notch.
Steve:how do i get to them,
Herobrine: Notch has made me not tell that,in fact he told me i may say nothing, so here i go "Nothing"
-herobrine smirks-
Steve: so, will you kick me out?
Herobrine: no, you may travel between the nether and mincraftia as you wish.But remember this,the testifacets, are not to be trusted, they released the enderman, they are responsible for what could be, the end
Steve:how?
Herobrine: because they are it's spies.
Steve: who's spies? Who is "it"?
Herobrine: i wish to tell you but,i can't
Notch won't let me, i would tell you it all so we have a chance,but he won't let me.
Steve: chance for what?
herobrine that is a i can say, and remember my warning about the testifacets!
-Herobrine leaves in red light-
Steve:Great, even more questions.
-goes through Nether portal-
Steve: ugg now wha...
Enderman.
Steve: avoid eye contact....
that's what made him mad
-hits with sword-
-enderman teleports-
Steve:where did it go?
-telaports behind Steve and attacks-
Steve: arggg! what do you want with me.
-slices enderman with sword and he telaports-
Steve: again!
-Steve turns just in time for teleporting enderman-
Steve: DIE!
-kills enderman-
Steve: whats that? its a pearl?
Herobrine:A enderpearl.
Steve: you followed me! and you didn't help with the enderman!
Herobrine: i needed to see if you could fight.
and you can congrats,here it will help you
-gives Steve diamond sword-
Steve: yes!
Herobrine: Diamond, though as nails.
Steve: thanks how can i...
-looks up to find herobrine is gone-
Steve: hopefully you don't follow me again.
Steve: now,Where am i...
great it dropped me at some random place,theirs a village over there!
-Steve goes to village-
Steve:it doesn't look like a ruin
-See villager-
Steve: That's cause its not.
Stranger: oh hello who are you?
Steve: my name is Steve...Who are you?
Krampon:my name is Krampon,i am a priest here in the village.
Steve:i am not sure Where i am, i went to hell and came out of it i was at your village,that was a weird sentence.
Krampon:It sure sounds like you had a great adventure, come and tell me about it.
Steve:i guess it can be called an adventure,sure
-Steve tells krampon all about and and gets to Herobrine's warning-
Krampon: why shouldn't you trust us?
Steve: no, don't trust the testifacets, not you krampon.
Krampon: but i am a testifacet.
Steve:What!But you are so nice! You Can't be as bad as Herobrine says you are!
krampon:well why don't we go and talk to this hero,herobringe?hirobionge?
Steve:Herobrine
Krampon:Thanks
Steve:Your welcome,so lets get going
-Steve and Krampon go back to the Nether portal-
Steve:krampon,Welcome to hell.
krampon: wow, this place is amazing!
Steve:Herobrine!HEROBRINE!
Krampon:he isn't here, lets head back.
Steve: ok,Lets go we'll Try tomorrow
-Goes back through Nether portal and arrives a Steve's home-
Steve:What i am home!
Krampon: this is your home?
Steve: yes this is my home nice place right?
Krampon: i Gue...
Steve: whats wrong?
krampon: the black demon...
Steve: Don't look at that it's a enderman!
Krampon: they are back, and real, i thought it was a myth.
Steve:What?
krampon: my ancestors released them from there home.
Steve:Your ancestors, so you didn't release them?
krampon:yes they come from a place called the en... ahh!
-Krampon gets hit by enderman-
Steve: Krampon! oh you are so going down!
-Steve fights enderman-
Steve:yes time for you to die!
-Steve kills Enderman-
Steve:There another pearl.
Krampon: The traveling pearl?
Steve: no the enderpearl.here you need food
-Steve gives krampon pork chop-
krampon:Thank you, How is it you know more than me?
Steve: its mostly Herobrine,notch has done nothing pretty much.
Krampon : The Great One? You know the Great One?
Steve : he ain't very great.
Notches voice from sky : i Heard That
Steve : oops
-Notch appears-
Notch : good day Steve I am doing GREAT. Wha.. What is this testifacate doing here!
Steve : there is nothing wrong with him!
notch : NO HE MUST LEAVE
Steve : But...
Notch : NO BUTS! He must leave!
Steve : Goodbye Krampon.
krampon: Sorry it is best for me to leave
-Krampon Leaves-
Steve : what was that for? it was his ancestors who released them!
Notch : he lies.The enderman were released in the year 180 but 5 months ago.
Steve : So he, he, he released them?
Notch : he is a priest so he help.
Steve : what... but it isn't possible! he Would Never release something so horrible!
Notch : He did and he didn't.
Steve : i don't understand.
Notch : you see Krampon went to a meeting of priest to get the most valuable thing ever, a traveling pearl
Steve : What?
Notch : They met in a large under-ground Structure called a stronghold, they built a portal to the middle realm and captured the enderman, to them they called them the black demon. they put them in cells through out the
Stronghold. they recorded data in books and made large libraries full of there findings, But it all went wrong... The portal Tainted the walls making them living creatures them self made of a silver color stone. the taint covered the walls in moss and cracked the wall too. they shut down the portal but the enderman escaped by telaporting out.many had died in the battle. they thought it was the end. but it was only the beginning.
Steve : Why did he Lie to me?
Notch : you see the Head priest heard a voice, it told him 'if you give us a human sacrifice i will call my people back!'so he Didn't tell you so they could sacrifice YOU!
Steve : Me?
Notch : yes you!
Steve : why can't they kill one of there own!
Notch : isn't it obvious! They are not human!
Steve : oh.
Notch: if he told you then you would not cooperate
Steve: no, you cant be right, i, i have to talk to him,
Notch: yes, you should KRAMPON!
Krampon: yes?
Notch: come in here please!
Krampon: ummm, ye-e-e-e-sss (in a shaky voice

 

I like it but it ends on such a cliff hanger you got to finish the story. And there are a lot of typos and use of the wrong word, but great work.

 

SORRY GUYS, i cant fit a single letter on my first post...

-Edit n.v.m. it seems that the amount of stuff you can right was raised, i have continued righting it!

 

awesome except for the testifacate's name. Krampon.